rough draft decisions, revisions and results

During my editing of the rough draft I used my Edit decision list as my guide for my rough edit I changed a few shots around because there was a repetition of similar shots that made the advert look boring. after changing the sequence I also began to experiment by changing the speed on the footage as seen in other sports related adverts I found this to be very effective because it gave the advert a very energetic look suiting the target audience. I found out however that the music file I already chose did not fit the style of advert I intended so I decided to leave it out. I then added the catch phrase for the golf academy advert and exported it for the client to give me feedback.